EDIT Rough draft based on the Instructor Comments
INSTRUCTOR COMMENTS:
You have some interesting ideas that could be developed into an argument, but as this stands, it is not an argumentative essay. Early on, the paper addresses discrimination when physicians collect information on race and ethnicity. This could be the focus of your paper. But that issue needs research.
I encourage you to narrow down your topic to just one specific idea and focus on making an argument readers could disagree with. Readers could certainly disagree on whether doctors should collect information on race and ethnicity. Then, use specific examples from her research to support your points
Please make this paper awesome! I need an A on this paper…
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